Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Laboi

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Laboi

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 17:17, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Page numbers to be stripped from references.
  • A bit of cleanup regarding the third paragraph of biology may be in order; perhaps not, but should be reviewed since the wording does seem rather outdated.
  • "Society and culture" should defo be subsectioned.
  • The present images should be sized up; worth exploring if there's more than can be added.
  • "Laboi in the galaxy" should be split in two paragraphs.
  • Can any of the events from Cracken's Rebel Operatives be dated IU a bit closer for the in the galaxy section? Some other SAs seem to have placement for it.
  • Think some BTS cleanup is definitely in order; one issue that popped out was lack of italics for the source there, aside from some other more minor things to modernize.—spookywillowwtalk 17:17, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 01:36, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 02:04, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:00, 30 December 2024 (UTC)