Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Kina Margath

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Kina Margath

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:58, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:45, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a gender/pronouns update.
  • Avarice could use context in the intro.
  • Biography should be sectioned and some subject relevant images added.
  • The date note used in the biography should be cleaned up to modern standards.
  • I'd like to have it confirmed the ABY dates are citable to sources cited?
  • Some of the personality/traits info would be better suited in a skills/abilities section (plus anything else of note added).
  • Missing an equipment section.
  • BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant information about later mentions of Kina, what does remain of it needs to be sourced. Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 5 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:11, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:32, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:44, 5 September 2024 (UTC)