Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Elassar Targon

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  • 1 Elassar Targon
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Featured status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Featured status

Elassar Targon

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 02:57, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 19:22, 9 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Unsolved {{Fact}} tag.
  • Missing context throughout.
  • Additional related images could be introduced.
  • Equipment/skills sections.
  • Gender/pronouns update.
  • BtS is unsourced and should be trimmed to modern standard.
  • Check abridged audiobooks.—spookywillowwtalk 02:57, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
  • The affiliations field of the infobox seems to be missing some stuff, it just lists the NR currently. Fan26 (Talk) 20:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
  • "Targon captured the attentions of a female, an event he attributed to his lucky gilding set." Is it possible to reword this? It sounds awkward plus the wording of "a female" just....no, that's objectively bad wording there.
  • There can be images of related subjects all throughout the body. Fan26 (Talk) 02:16, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed [initial round objections from 8th].—spookywillowwtalk 14:33, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Outstanding objections for two months [May 8th].—spookywillowwtalk 01:25, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 14:08, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 19:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)