Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Elassar Targon

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 02:57, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 19:22, 9 July 2023 (UTC)

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Elassar Targon

Unsolved {{Fact}} tag.
Missing context throughout.
Additional related images could be introduced.
Equipment/skills sections.
Gender/pronouns update.
BtS is unsourced and should be trimmed to modern standard.
Check abridged audiobooks.—spookywilloww^talk 02:57, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
The affiliations field of the infobox seems to be missing some stuff, it just lists the NR currently. Fan26 (Talk) 20:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
"Targon captured the attentions of a female, an event he attributed to his lucky gilding set." Is it possible to reword this? It sounds awkward plus the wording of "a female" just....no, that's objectively bad wording there.
There can be images of related subjects all throughout the body. Fan26 (Talk) 02:16, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed [initial round objections from 8th].—spookywilloww^talk 14:33, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Outstanding objections for two months [May 8th].—spookywilloww^talk 01:25, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 14:08, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 19:20, 9 July 2023 (UTC)