Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Duel on Rhen Var

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 20:39, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 08:47, 10 December 2024 (UTC)

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Duel on Rhen Var

{{Confirm}} tag to be sorted.
IU mentions for The New Essential Chronology, and, seemingly also Jedi vs. Sith, to be added.
TBF we would, nowadays, usually ask for the prelude to be subsectioned given the paragraphs are beefy as they are, and 2-3 paragraphs is preferred. That or, honestly, the prelude in this case is pretty long and could use a little bit of a haircut given modern standard. If it is sectioned, and possibly even if it isn't if it fits, another image would be nice.
Per the new CT, some of the infobox prev/conc/next need to be looked at. Specifically: the Battle of Ossus (Great Sith War) is sourced to an issue that this duel isn't mentioned in, meaning it alone cannot support that it happened before this event. A reference note with the appropriate explanatory logic, or using some other source like NEC, would be needed. The same issue for Mission to the Jedi Tower; it is cited to KOTOR comics that this duel isn't in. Both, of course, can stay once they're appropriately referenced.
BtS should be modernized, including mentioning the {{1st}} issue number, series proper, publisher, date etc etc.—spookywilloww^talk 20:39, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 01:05, 10 November 2024 (UTC)