Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Drom Guldi

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  • 1 Drom Guldi
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Featured status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Featured status

Drom Guldi

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 05:34, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:17, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Novel's page seems to note reader's companion as needed for the dating.
  • Hoth intro and biography context.
  • Biography subsectioning.
  • A lot of short, choppy sentences in the article body could be smoothed out.
  • Equipment needed.
  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • BtS modernization and sourcing.
  • Check (then add) abridged audiobook.—spookywillowwtalk 05:34, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 4 July 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Objections two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:14, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 00:16, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:17, 4 August 2023 (UTC)