- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.
Dorja
- Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
- Date Requested: 01:51, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:52, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- The intro might be better being split into another paragraph or so.
- Per the layout guide 'The "Affiliations" field of infoboxes shall list sub-bullets to a maximum depth of one.'
- The body needs to be restructured because some of the paragraphs within are really big, and there needs to be some subsectionig as well.
- Missing an equipment section.
- Anything that is notable enough to be included in a skills/abilities section?
- The BTS needs a real overhaul, the only things that need to be mentioned really is the first appearance in Dark Force Rising, and Dorja's first depiction in the relevant comic. I think the second paragraph can be removed as well as it's a bit speculative and there can be any reason for the difference between. Lewisr (talk) 01:51, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to retain Featured status
Vote to strip Featured status
Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 00:03, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:52, 21 October 2024 (UTC)