Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Dewlannamapia

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 19:01, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
Date Archived: 14:23, 12 April 2025 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Dewlannamapia

Death field needs to follow modern precedent of including the date and location in a written date note if not directly citable to a source.
Needs a pronouns/gender update.
I think the top quote can be prosified in the biography, and would also therefore get rid of the caption link for Bria.
The first section of the biography should be subsectioned, and I think the paragraphs in the section especially should be looked into reworking into smaller ones.
There's room for more images, and some of the current ones on the article should be made bigger.
Use of slave should be changed to enslaved.
The date for the events of Hero's Trial need a source.
In-universe mention in The New Essential Chronology needs to be fully documented and dated.
Is there nothing that can be added into a skills/abilities and/or an equipment section?
The BTS needs to remove redundant information including other material Dewlannamapia was mentioned in. Lewisr (talk) 19:01, 5 February 2025 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:15, 11 March 2025 (UTC)