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Dal Konur
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 04:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:39, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Image tagged since September 2022.
- Pronouns/gender/family fields + first-usage pronoun refs, as needed.
- Would like to see most of the large paragraphs broken up a bit; quite chunky for modern precedent. This will allow for greater subsectioning, with quotes and images added for each.
- Equipment to be sectioned out.
- BtS modernization.
- Looks like it generally needs a decent copy-edit as well, on the whole.—spookywillowwtalk 04:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:12, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:58, 19 February 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 02:02, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:39, 19 February 2024 (UTC)