Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Cesi Eirriss

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 04:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 08:07, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Cesi Eirriss

Death field in the infobox should follow the precedent of including the year annd location in a note if not directly citable to a source.
Commenor system is only mentioned in the infobox, so needs to find a way to include or pipelink in the body.
Context for Commenor in the intro, and context for Yavin Prime/Alderaan/Luke Skywalker in the body needed.
The first sentence of the biography should reference better and not stick the references at the end of the sentence. And the same with the last sentence in the death section.
Missing an equipment section, and possibly a skills section if anything of note.
The BTS needs to be cleared up to remove redundant information such as repeating what's currently in the apps/sources sections. Lewisr (talk) 04:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 23 July 2024 (UTC)