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Broadside/Legends
- Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
- Date Requested: 00:56, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 06:56, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
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- Generally enquiring regarding the source for this, does Star Wars: The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia state Broadside is a male? Or should it be changed to something else?
- Needs a pronouns update.
- Affiliations field needs to be updated to reflect the layout guide.
- I think the intro could be split.
- Kamino being Broadside's homeworld and that he was created there (as standard with clone trooper articles) needs to be included in the biography.
- The images can be increased in size.
- Ryndellia needs context.
- The caption for the image in the personality/traits section should be made more relevant to the section or change the image to something suitable.
- Some of the PT section should be split off into skills/abilities and equipment sections (as well as any other information of note adding).
- The Procedure comic and TCW episode need full cited release dates. Lewisr (talk) 00:56, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
