Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Blockade of the Hydian Way

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Blockade of the Hydian Way

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 03:19, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 08:14, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Two {{Fact}} tags unsolved over a month—BtS unsourced.
    • Added refs OOM 224 (he/him) 09:24, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
  • BtS also requires modernization by modern standards, mostly removal of info we don't list nowadays.
    • Removed an entire paragraph just listing a bunch other sources it was mentioned in; effectively regurgitating "Appearances" and "Sources" Fan26 (Talk) 03:32, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Participant images seem quite small.—spookywillowwtalk 03:19, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
  • WP:LG doesn't permit 'Notable participants' section.—spookywillowwtalk 14:31, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed 'Notable participants' section, which currently fixes the above issue-though I may see about adding those images back into the article where it would be needed. Fan26 (Talk) 02:07, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Alderaan, Devaron (it does specify region, but better to also say it was a world at least), Ord Radama, Nar Shaddaa.
  • Slight BtS trimming per modern precedent may be needed, eyeing particularly the sentence starting with "The third and fourth installments…"
  • Noticing some dupe linking.—spookywillowwtalk 18:22, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Per the layout guide 'The "prev", "conc", and "next" fields of event infoboxes shall only be used for events that are relevant to the article's subject and are mentioned in the article's text.' From what I can see neither the prev or next field events are mentioned outside of the infobox so they even need to be mentioned in the body or removed from the infobox Lewisr (talk) 04:11, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed ones that aren't mentioned elsewhere Lewisr (talk) 05:35, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Noting for the record that I removed some phrasing that seemed unencyclopedic Fan26 (Talk) 02:10, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Marked for probation due to 1st objection regarding fact tags remaining unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:17, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

  1. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 05:35, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:36, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote OOM 224 (he/him) 08:13, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status