Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Beryl Chiffonage

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Contents

  • 1 Beryl Chiffonage
    • 1.1 Object
      • 1.1.1 ThrawnChiss
      • 1.1.2 spookly
      • 1.1.3 Lew
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Featured status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Featured status

Beryl Chiffonage

  • Requested By: ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola
  • Date Requested: 18:08, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 17:04, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

ThrawnChiss
  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • IU dates need citation.
  • "Risiev Credal and the Rogue Doctrine" has six small paragraphs; these will either need to be combined or subsectioned.
  • Publication date needed for Insider 74.
  • Needs to note in the BTS about the 100 Scenes spelling inconsistency.
    • Ideally got all of these.
  • Someone needs to get their hands on Star Wars in 100 Scenes (2015) to check if he's mentioned. If it includes no canon material, it is Legends per the Wookieepedia:Canon policy, which states that "All re-releases, remakes, and adaptation" of Legends material that have no canon material are still Legends, and should thus be listed on this page if mentioned.ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:08, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
    • If he's featured, it likely wouldn't be anything that isn't already covered elsewhere relevant to the character. I'm requesting this objection to be struck, as it's most likely only a reprint if anything. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:41, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Yes, but it would still need to be listed in the "Sources" section. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 12:54, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
        • I would hope for an Inq or someone else to weigh in. Generally, the precedent seems to be that if there's no suspected missing information, then articles being flagged because of possibly being included in something that's not expected to be missing information isn't done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:15, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • I think the image captions should tie themselves to Beryl in some form; otherwise they seem kinda just generally put there. Also, the images could stand to be sized up a bit in the current wiki skin.
  • Seems like an image of Airen Cracken might be suitable for the first Biography section if they worked closely together.
  • Some of the PT seems more like skills section material.—spookywillowwtalk 17:27, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Hopefully all of these are addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:07, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • Missing context for Thyrsus, Liaq, and the second Death Star Lewisr (talk) 23:04, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Added for all. Note that I didn't see anything in The Essential Atlas confirming Liaq is a planet. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:51, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
      • Made a slight change to the Liaq context Lewisr (talk) 01:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Featured status

  1. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 16:04, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 16:10, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:43, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status