Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Bec Lawise/Legends

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 15:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 07:45, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

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Bec Lawise/Legends

The death field should include the date and location in a single death note per modern precedent.
Needs a pronouns/gender update, as well as the family fields cleared out.
Would like to see the intro use some dates.
Raxus, Mandalore, and Scipio need context in the intro and Onderon needs context in the body.
I think the top section in the biography could benefit from some sub sectioning. Would also like to see some more images in the biography.
The image caption in the personality/traits section should be made more relevant to the section, or replaced with a more fitting image.
Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities section?
Missing an equipment section.
The air date for "A Friend in Need" needs to be cited to a source other than the episode. And I also don't see the need to include the "Crisis at the Heart" information so that can be cut.
There's a piece of concept art in the "Heroes on Both Sides" episode guide that should be mentioned and included in the BTS. Lewisr (talk) 15:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 01:30, 6 November 2024 (UTC)