Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Battle of the Forge

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 04:53, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 20:18, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that passed review. Please do not modify it.

Battle of the Forge

The event in the next field needs to be mentioned in the body or removed from the infobox.
The images can be made bigger.
Potentially room for some more images to be added.
~~The paragraphs in the 'Before the Forge' section look like they can merged together in some form.~~
~~The BTS needs to be cleaned up.~~
~~Category:Quotes with obsolete sourcing/SWTOR needs to be addressed.~~ Lewisr (talk) 04:53, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
- All done. Cade Calrayn 23:22, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
  - The BTS image can be made bigger still, and the 'War on Tython' and 'An uprising quelled' sections are still imageless Lewisr (talk) 05:15, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
  - The Coruscant mission in the next field is only linked in the infobox Lewisr (talk) 05:17, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
The image caption on the BTS image should be presented with "their" rather than "his or her."
The first paragraph in prelude should be split
The context for Coruscant should be in front of the planet name instead of later on, and Corellia in the BTS needs context Lewisr (talk) 05:15, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
- All done. Cade Calrayn 20:33, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

Marked for probation for 2nd round objections dated Feb. 21st.—spookywilloww^talk 17:11, 23 March 2024 (UTC)