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Azlyn Rae
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 19:38, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 08:04, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Several of the biography subsections should be further sectioned per modern precedent, to be 2-3 paragraphs per, ideally, and then populated with more quotes and images. Even for the first subsection—which is technically two paragraphs—that can be rearranged into 3 because they do look quite chunky.
- Dauntless could use a touch of context more.
- Throughout, there's a small handful of double-referencing that should be sourced to individual parts of sentences, ideally.
- That BtS is probably going to need a hefty haircut per modern standards. Alongside the typical cleanup stuff like full comic release dates.—spookywillowwtalk 19:38, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 03:47, 29 July 2024 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 04:45, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:03, 29 July 2024 (UTC)