Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Alfonso Luiz Obota

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Alfonso Luiz Obota

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:47, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 18:10, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update, as well as the family fields being cleared out.
  • Any reason the skin color wasn't added?
  • I think the biography could use a restructure in terms of its sectioning, the first paragraph should not be by itself and can be worked into the first section. And the "Scam" section should be sectioned further.
  • There's room for new images in the body.
  • Anything that can be included in a skills/abilities section?
  • Missing an equipment section.
  • BTS needs to include a release date for the audio adaptation. Lewisr (talk) 00:47, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

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  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:17, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 18:07, 12 September 2024 (UTC)