Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Afsheen Makati

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Afsheen Makati

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:49, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:15, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • The date note regarding Afsheen's death looks like it could really be cleaned up to explain how thre c. 5 ABY date is reached.
  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
  • Hair and eye color infobox exclusive.
  • Any reason why the skin color wasn't added?
  • Steadfast redirect to be fixed.
  • Multiple contexts missing throughout the intro and body for locations.
  • Missing an equipment section.
  • BTS could be cleaned up to remove some redundant wording and information. Various release dates missing from sources mentioned.
  • Should note the characters mention in an in-universe source Lewisr (talk) 00:49, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:07, 2 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

Vote to strip Featured status

  1. Inqvote Two months unaddressed Lewisr (talk) 00:32, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:33, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:14, 2 September 2024 (UTC)