- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Zgorth'sth
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 12:33, February 8, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: I got nothing. Even with that name.
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Support
I knew I had forgotten to support a nom. Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 17:34, February 13, 2011 (UTC)
Well done. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:24, February 17, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 11:11, March 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:53, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 11:00, March 11, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Moffship
Just one - please mention his species and gender in the beginning of the bio.- Done.
- Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 21:11, February 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review :) - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:19, February 9, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review :) - Cavalier One
Ecks Dee
I actually think the intro could use slight expansion. The IU body is over 1,000 words while the intro is currently 119 words.- Up to 207, now. Any longer would require more context than is necessary in my opinion.
Also I'm not exactly sure why you have a (Mentioned only) after a source item—technically all sources are "mentions only".- Me neither. Removed. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:27, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Me neither. Removed. - Cavalier One
- 1358 (Talk) 15:25, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
"Fleet Intelligence" here currently links to a disambig page. It seems it might be appropriate to create a specific article for the Rebel Alliance Fleet Intelligence: "who ordered him to notify Fleet Intelligence"- Created as "Fleet Intelligence (Alliance to Restore the Republic), since I can't find reference to it being known as Alliance Fleet Intelligence or somesuch. It can be moved if later information is found, however.
- Reviewing notes: a) I tweaked the intro quote's attribution, since it kind of read strange to me; and b) I felt like it was better to avoid linking to the RAS disambig page in the first sentence of the BTS, so I tweaked the linking a little. Feel free to revise or change either of these to your preference. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:21, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
- No, both are fine. The first was a simple error. The second is fine as well; my concern here was linking to the actual edition articles, so removing the link to disambig is fine. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:37, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
- No, both are fine. The first was a simple error. The second is fine as well; my concern here was linking to the actual edition articles, so removing the link to disambig is fine. - Cavalier One
Eyrezer
Why do you have the Reb sourcebooks as Appearances? My understanding has always been that they are sources. --Eyrezer 10:47, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
- While I would tend to agree with you, Zgorth'sth appears in an IU narrative within the book. Unfortunately, it doesn't have a name, or I would have created an article for it and listed the Reb sourcebooks in the Sources section. Since its an IU narrative piece, it is an Appearance rather than a Source in my opinion, and better reflects the nature of the work. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:29, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 11:00, March 11, 2011 (UTC)