Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Yavid

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Yavid

(5 Inqs/4 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Thefourdotelipsis 23:06, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 12:08, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. Ozzel 04:45, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:41, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
  5. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) NR Seal 23:27, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
  6. Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:45, 4 November 2007 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Napoleon complex. Heh.—Graestan(This party's over) 22:40, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Eh, the little bastard. Greyman(Paratus) 22:52, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Grr. Quit edit conflicting me and just queueueue the damn thing! -- Darth Culator (Talk) 22:43, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. I'm not an expert, but I'd say bloodthirsty is POV. There's also a bit of repetition in the intro/main body: "carving out a slice" and "carve out a piece," one of which could be rephrased. "...actually a cell that allowed powered ships" -- I might be reading this wrong, but could that be clarified a little. Also, perhaps a minor explanation of who Teek is? (I know I'm rather biased). Other than those few minor things, I enjoyed reading it. :) -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:55, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. Seems like there are a few repetitions of specific words and phrases between the intro and bio (and, specifically with "short in stature," the P&T as well). Might want to reword a little to keep each section fresh. -- Ozzel 04:45, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. In the intro, it is mentioned that he is a general, and shortly thereafter it is mentioned that he became a general. Redundant.—Graestan(This party's over) 17:43, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 23:25, 9 November 2007 (UTC)