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Yar Togna
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 17:44, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 23:30, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1135 words (195 introduction, 840 body, 100 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1138 words (195 introduction, 842 body, 101 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST
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Support
ThrawnChiss7 
Assembly Cupola 18:36, 18 October 2024 (UTC)- Wok142 (talk) 22:40, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- --Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:45, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 00:48, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 00:57, 13 November 2024 (UTC)- Booply (talk) 00:09, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- CometSmudge (talk) 22:22, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
Object
Wok
Second para of Sentients of Yar Togna, the second sentence there is quite long. I would propose putting a period after "scalps" and then just saying "Additionally, Tognath often used artificial lenses..." and then taking the "as well" off the end.Wok142 (talk) 19:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)- Thanks! Imperators II(Talk) 21:20, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 23:28, 15 November 2024 (UTC)