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XoXaan (Redux review)
- Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 131.
- Date added: October 24, 2021
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UberSoldat93 
(talk) 13:52, 4 May 2022 (UTC)- OOM 224 13:40, 6 May 2022 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor Holocomm 04:22, 5 July 2022 (UTC)- MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 17:43, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Why isn't there a death date in the infobox? It's not incorrect to provide a range there."More than four thousand years passed, and eventually, XoXaan's wait ended around 17 BBY, Korriban with the arrival of A'Sharad Hett...." This doesn't read right.Context for Coruscant, Cade Skywalker, and Had Abbadon.The Equipment image is of rather low quality and I would like to see it replaced.If the discrepancy regarding her appearance in multiple sources is already documented in-universe, then I believe it is unnecessary to mention it again in the BTS. I also think that illustration should be documented under Biography instead of Equipment.BTS can use an image of the comic.UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:39, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
Please format the Lost Tribe of the Sith comic titles as per the Manual of Style.UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:09, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
Since the article has undergone a ton of expansions, I'm assuming there's nothing else pending now?Can we get some more sectioning for "A newfound empire"? It is 5 paragraphs long currently, I do feel like the Book of Sith and Force ghost stuff can be spun off into its own section.UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
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"with the Dark Jedi leadership's horrid creations requiring" What creations?Supreme Emperor Holocomm 16:18, 30 June 2022 (UTC)