Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Walex Cantwell Blissex I

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Walex Cantwell Blissex I

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:42, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: New information pushed it past GA limit.
• Date Archived: 01:09, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1009 words (124 introduction, 595 body, 290 behind the scenes)
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(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:05, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
2. Carrying vote over from GAN.—spookywilloww^talk 16:18, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
3. After reviewing the changes since my last edit. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:19, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 16:30, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 21:51, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
6. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:52, 24 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• You establish that Blissex was an Alliance officer while viewing the hologram and then establish it again in the next paragraph by 4 ABY. I think you can just remove the second establishment, otherwise you could move the hologram section after the Endor stuff since we don't know it's placement. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Moved to after Endor --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:18, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
• The two sections on Blissex's canon naming should be together rather than having the Legends naming in between them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:18, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 11:52, 24 December 2023 (UTC)