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Vulpter
- Nominated by: Imperialles 16:37, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: It stinks!
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
Deep Core, represent! Xicer9(Combadge) 00:46, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Superb. Thefourdotelipsis 14:01, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:02, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Well done. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 16:09, July 3, 2010 (UTC)
Nice job, Imp. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:44, July 4, 2010 (UTC)
Superb.—Tommy 9281 15:53, July 5, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xicer
Infobox: Shouldn't Carbonite Run be listed in the "routes" parameter?Infobox/Inhabitants: Vulpter is shaded in light blue on page 17 of the Atlas, putting its population c. 25 ABY between 100 and 500 million, not 1 and 10 million.Description: "Despite this central location near the center of the galaxy" Redundant phrasing.Is "Vulptereen" or "Vulptereens" the correct plural form of Vulptereen? You seem to use both throughout the article.- Nothing else, good work. Xicer9
(Combadge) 00:11, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- All should be sorted. Regarding the Atlas thing, I was looking at the color of the orb itself for some reason. --Imperialles 00:33, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Moffship
First paragraph of "Topography" is not sourced.Reference 18 is broken.- That's all. Not bad. Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 00:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Just a result of things getting re-shuffled. Should be alright now. --Imperialles 00:55, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:53, July 5, 2010 (UTC)