Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Vana Dorja

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Vana Dorja

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo (talk) 06:13, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I always liked her.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 12:43, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 04:19, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Protectorate (talk) 18:44, December 3, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:42, December 31, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:40, January 19, 2014 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 06:46, February 13, 2014 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 15:35, March 14, 2014 (UTC)

Object

A Vong nom!
  • Context on Mon Cala in the body. Is it a world, a moon....
    • Done. Added it to the intro too.
  • That`s all I could find. 501st dogma(talk) 13:50, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review! Hooray for the NJO! Menkooroo (talk) 07:05, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
Sire, I have found a solution to the problem with your Dorja
  • "The invaders conquered the capital, but before they did, Dorja escaped offworld" - I can't quite put my finger on it, but this is kinda back-and-forth phrasing that doesn't read well.
    • Good eye. Rephrased.
  • That's actually it, and that's hardly anything. Excellent stuff. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 02:56, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the compliment and the review. Menkooroo (talk) 03:34, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:35, March 14, 2014 (UTC)