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Unstable Terrain Artillery Transport

(5 Inqs/4 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Thefourdotelipsis 13:42, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. Chack Jadson (Talk) 18:56, 5 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lovably short. Graestan Jedi Order (This party's over) 00:37, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 05:01, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
    Inqvote Imperialles 15:57, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 01:35, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
  6. jSarek 20:46, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Lord Hydronium 07:20, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  8. Although the main quote is questionable. Unit 8311 17:55, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:36, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
    • Reditribute links in body of article, placing links at the first mention of each article to be linked. Also, look over for more potential links.
    • "Vulnerable" and "constantly prone to enemy attack" are POV.
    • Vape "to unknown ends," please.
    • —Graestan Jedi Order (This party's over) 01:14, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. No lead quote and only 999 words! :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:33, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
    • Well, it has three more words than it did before, so it should be fine now on this front. As for the quote, nothing anywhere has been said about this vehicle In-Universe. Take from that what you will. jSarek 20:45, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
      • The rule is "a leading quote at the beginning is required". If no quote exists, it can't be an FA. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:20, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
        • Yes, unless something truly strange happens, like the rules are bent or broken entirely just to get a pet project on the front page. Enochf 21:29, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
        • Quote added; rules are intact, as moronic as they are. Thefourdotelipsis 00:57, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. It's down to 995 words again. Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:48, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. POV in introduction: "Slow and vulnerable, the vehicle was adept at…" Do you have a source for that "vulnerable"? --Imperialles 22:00, 11 October 2007 (UTC) - Struck per proxy IRC thingy.
    • "it suffered heavy losses in the Clone Wars due to its slow speed. Because of its raised deck, a well-placed hit underneath the vehicle could send it into a somersault" Thefourdotelipsis 01:16, 12 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 22:43, 14 October 2007 (UTC)

  • Yet another installment in my WTS series. I imagine that FU will provide some new info, but rest assured, I'll get right on it. Thefourdotelipsis 13:42, 5 October 2007 (UTC)