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Unidentified smuggler (Imperial-class Star Destroyer)
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 15:38, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 20:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1249 words (117 introduction, 972 body, 160 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1248 words (117 introduction, 971 body, 160 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES, WP:VG
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Support
—spookywillowwtalk 16:01, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 23:45, 11 March 2024 (UTC)- Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 15:00, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
- NanoLuukeCloning Facility 16:35, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 06:28, 21 March 2024 (UTC)- Booply (talk) 17:49, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
- Wok142 (talk) 20:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Object
Wok142
In the Detained section, maybe add a comma after panel? That sentence is a bit of a run-on in my opinion.Wok142 (talk) 18:05, 22 March 2024 (UTC)- Does that read any better to you? Imperators II(Talk) 18:16, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
One last nitpicky thing. In the Freeing A4-J4 section, I would smooth out the sentence "At that point, the smuggler noticed in the corridor a laser security grid protecting an air duct." to read "At that point, the smuggler noticed a laser security grid protecting an air duct in the corridor."Wok142 (talk) 19:05, 22 March 2024 (UTC)- You are so right. :P Imperators II(Talk) 19:41, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)