Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified smuggler (Imperial-class Star Destroyer)

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Unidentified smuggler (Imperial-class Star Destroyer)

• Nominated by: Imperators II^(Talk) 15:38, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 20:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1249 words (117 introduction, 972 body, 160 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1248 words (117 introduction, 971 body, 160 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES, WP:VG

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 16:01, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 23:45, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
3. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 15:00, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
4. NanoLuuke^{Cloning Facility} 16:35, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 06:28, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 17:49, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
7. Wok142 (talk) 20:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok142

• In the Detained section, maybe add a comma after panel? That sentence is a bit of a run-on in my opinion. Wok142 (talk) 18:05, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Does that read any better to you? Imperators II^(Talk) 18:16, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Nice. Wok142 (talk) 19:05, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
• One last nitpicky thing. In the Freeing A4-J4 section, I would smooth out the sentence "At that point, the smuggler noticed in the corridor a laser security grid protecting an air duct." to read "At that point, the smuggler noticed a laser security grid protecting an air duct in the corridor." Wok142 (talk) 19:05, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
  • You are so right. :P Imperators II^(Talk) 19:41, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)