Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified moon (Tribunal)

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Unidentified moon (Tribunal)

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 03:38, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: c. May 2023 I'd said I'd probably take this back up if no one else wanted to or Silver didn't return. In truth, other than perhaps needing some odds and ends tidied up and a handful of info tweaks, this was in remarkably good shape since it had passed not that long ago as far as board standards go. But yeah; not that it needed much work or anything, but shame for such a nice one to not be status when the only thing that really killed it was wordcount.
• Date Archived: 21:51, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1154 words (128 introduction, 879 body, 147 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1146 words (125 introduction, 874 body, 147 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:ASTWP:TCWWP:SWCT

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Nice job bringing this back Wok142 (talk) 05:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
2. Glad to see it back Lewisr (talk) 01:38, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
3. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:44, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 21:49, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
5. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 21:50, 16 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok

• A 19 BBY date for the intro can be added
• There's a mention of Sidious prior to the point where he is properly contextualized so that will need to be tweaked slightly
• For the sentence "Thus, a fight began onboard the ship," I think it would be ideal to state that the clones were attacking Ahsoka just to be extremely clear about the order still applying to former Jedi Wok142 (talk) 21:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Sorted above —spookywilloww^talk 02:58, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

ThrawnChiss

• More of a comment than an objection, but I find it weird how you have "Nu-class shuttle" and "BTL-B Y-wing starfighter/bomber". Having the full name of the Y-wing seems really clunky and long, what if you just piped it to "Y-wing"? ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Swapped; hadn't been for any particular reason, probably a holdover.—spookywilloww^talk 20:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:51, 16 December 2024 (UTC)