Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Umbaran airbase

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Umbaran airbase

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 23:33, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Three years ago, this page was just 45 words long when I did a little expansion on it. Truly one of the greatest Clone Wars arcs. Wok142 (talk) 23:33, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 18:01, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 2958 words (344 introduction, 2273 body, 341 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 2910 words (333 introduction, 2236 body, 341 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(0 Inqs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support votes

  1. StarWarsFan327 (talk) 13:35, 30 May 2025 (UTC)

Objections

StarWarsFan
  • In the intro, I'm thinking the wording should be clarified to make it clear Anakin's battalion was one battalion within the 501st.
    • Amended in the intro and also clarified in the body. Wok142 (talk) 18:17, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
  • In the history section, Ordnance links to a Legends page.
  • The citations in the last paragraph of 'Dissension in the ranks,' should be corrected as the second half of the paragraph with Fives and Jesse's execution is from "Carnage of Krell." StarWarsFan327 (talk) 12:38, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Removed link and adjusted citations. Wok142 (talk) 18:17, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
Smilingstation00
  • Could the Description section be expanded with more about individual rooms and locations within the airbase? I feel like we see enough to include more visual details. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 05:21, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
    • I've added a little bit of detail but I would like to know if there was anything specific you had in mind that you think should be included? Wok142 (talk) 20:03, 6 August 2025 (UTC)
      • I just mean more detailed visual descriptions of each room we see in the airbase, something like the visual descriptions here, for example. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 12:41, 8 August 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Objections from Sorcerer at 28 days unaddressed. Has been pinged a few times by bot but believe Wok is away for the time being, so it can be put back up when he returns Lewisr (talk) 17:22, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 17:27, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote OOM 224 18:01, 5 September 2025 (UTC)