Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ton Phanan

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Ton Phanan

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Havac 02:54, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
  2. Harrar 12:18, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Thefourdotelipsis 01:04, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:48, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 21:31, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Imperialles 20:42, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the ghostly apparition of Atarumaster88's desk
    • You say that Trigit knew that "it was an ambush", but he had planned an ambush of the New Reps. Please clarify this. Para 2 of Trapping Trigit.
    • Seriously, the word "ambush" is so overused in those sections that I could gag.
    • I will pull a Goodwood and demand a link to starfighter combat, since the word "dogfight" is used in the article. Demand it!
    • Have a *mutters something* Some kinda zombie Inq 04:20, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
      • See about that, Captain Happy. Havac 04:28, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
  2. Quotes need to be formatted correctly per this CT. Also, the "eras" field of the infobox needs to be refed. --Imperialles 13:05, 18 November 2007 (UTC)
    • Eras are reffed, and those quotes are formatted correctly. Havac 19:58, 18 November 2007 (UTC)
      • No, they're not. Read the outcome of the CT. --Imperialles 20:02, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Comments

  • In the intro you say he was wounded at Yavin, but throughout you say he was wounded at Endor. My memory says Endor, but I was just wondering if this was a mistake or if he was wounded on two separate occasions. Great article.Harrar 12:17, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
    • Typo. Havac 19:25, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
  • I thought it was considered better to avoid dialogue in quotes? Other than that, good stuff. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:13, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
  • I despise the play-by-play in this article, but if the other Inqs (besides the writer) are okay with it, then I won't make an issue of it. Poor Phanan's been Havaced. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:20, 14 November 2007 (UTC)