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Tobler Ceel/Legends
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:55, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I hope this gets the Inq's Ceel of approval
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:VG
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I Cee that CC has new FANs. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:44, 4 October 2021 (UTC)- It's over Trade Federation! I have the high ground! (Provided you're okay with this edit!) VergenceScatter (talk) 02:39, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nice work. UberSoldat93
(talk) 03:29, 26 February 2022 (UTC) 
MasterFred(talk) 23:57, 4 March 2022 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:00, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 00:32, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 00:54, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
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I think there's room for one related image, like Jar Jar or the control ship.Fan26 (Talk) 03:22, 21 September 2021 (UTC)- Done and found one for the Bts too Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:02, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
{{ForceCollection}} needs to be implemented.- Got a couple of dup links.
- Is the ref at the end of the first "The heat of battle" paragraph intended to be to the film and not the novel? If so, that paragraph has duplicate references.
- Seems like you're missing a word here: "...ordered the activation the shield generators."
- A little more context on Anakin accidentally joining Bravo Flight would be appreciated, it's kind of unclear what that's supposed to mean right now.
- On top of that, Anakin needs context for himself.
- I'd recommend removing one of the instances of the word "general" from here, it could be confusing which general is which: "A majority of the Gungans were not able to escape, including the general, who was taken prisoner on the battlefield and held near the other officers, including General Binks."
- P+T also has duplicate refs.
A little context on Chronicles?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:09, 23 September 2021 (UTC)- That should be everything, I've added context for Anakin and actually removed the parts about Bravo Flight, since it's not especialy relevant to the article topic Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:05, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
It is better to establish gender and species in a single place instead of both the bio and P&T.- Moved to the bio
Speaking of P&T, some of its info is more suitable for a "Skills and abilities" section.- Done, found some info I'd missed for the P&t too
I would like to see his attire documented under Equipment.- Done
Full date required for TPM since you're discussing its adaptations in the BTS.- Added
Was the 3-star Force Collection card released alongside the 1-star card? That warrants a simultaneous 1stp.- They are as far as I can tell
Whatlinkshere shows me a link to The New Essential Guide to Weapons and Technology, which is not listed here currently.UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:38, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
- Ooh new info, thanks Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:29, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:39, 5 March 2022 (UTC)