Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Terrinald Screed/Legends

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Terrinald Screed

(5 Inq/1 User/6 Total)

Support

  1. Adamwankenobi 06:39, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Yessir. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:06, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote No complaints from this guy. Greyman@wikiajanitor(Talk) 20:45, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Very interesting. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:28, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 22:59, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 00:32, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
    • You might add something to the BTS explaining that Rebellion apparently depicts his eye color as being different than brown, if you're going to use that image for the infobox. At this low resolution, it's looking very bluish to me.
    • A brief descriptor for the Great Heap would give it some context: "led him to form alliances with the Great Heep"
      • Just an amending comment to the prior objection, I honestly thought that was an organization of some kind rather than an individual as I'm learning from the article
    • Also, I feel Screed being the Emperor's right-hand-man should be notable enough for a mention in the intro
    • I suspect you mean to say "meet with the governor" here: "Screed took a Lambda-class shuttle to Koong's Umboo Lightstation to meet with the admiral"
    • Forgot a word in this sentence, evidently: "was using his lightstation to cause unsuspecting ships to in order to scavenge their cargo"
    • If you're choosing to leave the details of his eye surgery ambiguous for the article itself, I'd still like to see it detailed it in the BTS, probably under its own sub-section Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:04, 14 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:38, 26 May 2008 (UTC)