Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Teek

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Teek

(5 Inqs/4 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 19:48, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Much better. Thefourdotelipsis 23:12, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Imperialles 16:44, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Nah-nah! Graestan Jedi Order (This party's over) 18:12, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
  5. Nasty little bug-lover! -- Ozzel 17:52, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:41, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
  7. Despite the fact that this is another Ewoks nom ;). Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 00:16, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  8. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:16, 10 October 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 09:07, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  • I've only looked at the first two sections, but so far, it reads like a play-by-play. It needs to be trimmed down or cleaned up for concise...ness. Also, I'll get you those images as soon as possible. Thefourdotelipsis 00:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the images. I've had a go at de-play-by-playing the Wicket and Cindel section, though I'm not sure if I'm doing all that good a job. Could you take a look and tell me what you think? -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 12:51, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
    • I've had a go at the other sections, though once again I don't know if I'm doing a good job -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 17:21, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
  1. From the lair of Hobbes15
    • Did Cindel take the crystal whateveryoucallit or not? As far as the article says, she saw it, and then they ran.
      • Addressed.
    • Doesn't The Battle for Endor seem a little grandiose a section title? The battle seems far less serious to me, although I know that's what the movie's called.
      • Addressed.
    • What happens to Terak's men after he's defeated. All that is said is that they retreated to the Keep.
    • That's all from me on this one. First a severed head, and now this guy? What next? ;) Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 03:21, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. Trivia-like BTS. Betterify. --Imperialles 13:15, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
    • Do you mean the format or the content of the BtS? If you mean format, then it's been addressed. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:10, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. A few things:
    • It might be worth mentioning briefly what brings Cindel and Wicket to Noa in the first place and why the Sanyassans are after her.
      • Two sentences inserted.
    • Two uses of "bloodthirsty" seem POVish.
      • Removed/changed.
    • Ditto calling the Sanyassans "beasts".
      • Addressed.
    • Skirmish with Terak's warriors: "Teek found Terak's men, however—he inadvertently led them back to Noa's ship." That em dash just makes no sense dagnammit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:25, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
      • Fixed. No idea how that got there in the first place, and how 4 other people managed to miss it :P Thanks for your comments and input -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 18:57, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. Sorry, but I'm afraid we're going to have to do something about that main quote, since it's not entirely accurate. Perhaps "You're a sweet spirit." or "You nasty little bug-lover!"? -- Ozzel 03:54, 12 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 15:26, 14 October 2007 (UTC)

  • There are several more pictures to be added to the article (courtesy of 4dot), but due to Wikia imploding and 4dot living on the other side of the world, they have yet to be added. They should be there in a couple of hours, anyway. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 19:48, 6 October 2007 (UTC)