Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/TIE/sh VIP shuttle

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TIE/sh VIP shuttle

  • Nominated by: OOM 224 (he/him) 11:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A former FA. I've completed the updates that led to its status being removed in 2020 (Endgame and the inward/outward wings issue) and expanded quite signficiantly with additional information mainly from Fate of the Jedi: Conviction.
  • Date Archived: 16:32, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 2858 words (339 introduction, 1744 body, 775 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:COMICS, WP:FFG, WP:NOVELS, WP:LEGACY

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Support

  1. Great job in bringing this one up to modern standards! UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:21, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Incredibly clean and a fascinating read. Well done! Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 20:48, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. Fan26 (Talk) 15:48, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:56, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 02:32, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Nice work on restoring this gem! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:31, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • As a preliminary, you should vet adaptations of ESB. Needa's article alone has a bunch more listed. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:12, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
  • BTS could be illustrated a bit more. Also missing alternate name from Behind the Magic. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:15, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Thanks, checked and added what I could find. Other points also addressed. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:31, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Could use an image of the Journal for "Naming and specifications." UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:00, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
        • The Journal image is already used in "Characteristics," so I've taken one from Galaxy Guide 3 instead. Also mentioned the source in the prose since it's being used to cite the next paragraph about the specifications changes. OOM 224 (he/him) 21:20, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
          • Oh I meant the cover of the magazine. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:10, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
            • Oh I see. I think I'm gonna stick to the current TIE/sh image though since I feel that's more helpful for readers. OOM 224 (he/him) 12:40, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Would appreciate if the referencing between the infobox and body was consistent e.g. laser cannon.
    • Standardised.
  • Context for Vader and Nam Chorios in the intro.
    • Done, with context added for Jerne as well.
  • You state that the TIE/sh was a TIE/sa variant at least three times overall, the info in History can be reworded to alleviate this.
    • Reworded; I've also moved one bit up to "Characteristics."
  • Would like to see a date for Yavin.
    • Slightly disagree with this one; since the dating system is based on the Battle of Yavin itself, it shouldn't be given its own BBY date. On the other hand, I think it's good to specify that it's nineteen years into the Empire's reign for clear timeframe is given, so that's what I've done.
  • Avenger being an ISD II needs another source. In Legends, identification via comm tower is inaccurate.
    • Bah, I never liked these classifications (done).
  • Context for FarStar.
    • Added.
  • Context for A New Hope.
    • Added.
  • I honestly see no reason to cite Part the Fifth if it's not mentioned anywhere else.
    • Hmm, it is just a version of the film, so I guess not.
  • There is a month and year available for Devilry.
    • Good catch; added.
  • The DarkStryder and Devilry sections can be combined. Maybe a paragraph break for the DarkStryder info too. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:22, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Indeed; implemented! OOM 224 (he/him) 21:23, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
      • I've also gone ahead and revised the intro for concision. OOM 224 (he/him) 21:59, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • The first mention from the ESB novelization is missing from the BTS
  • In 'Fall of Imperial leadership' would it be worth either using the date for "Endgame" or at least mentioning when the Battle of Endor was? Since both section paragraphs start with 'X after the Battle of Endor'. Would help to give a little clarity to when the events are taking place Lewisr (talk) 20:33, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Good point. Slipped in Endor's date. OOM 224 (he/him) 21:06, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
      • Perfect thanks Lewisr (talk) 21:10, 17 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:31, 12 December 2023 (UTC)