Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/TIE/D Defender

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TIE/D Defender

(7 Inqs/3 Users/10 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:27, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Gah! Information overload! Cull Tremayne 07:23, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
  3. Great Artical Dark Lord Xander (Embrace The Dark Side!)Neo-Crusader emblem 09:55, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
  4. Deserves it. Unit 8311 14:37, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Imperialles 09:28, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Great article. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:22, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Excellent read, very informative. Greyman(Paratus) 23:23, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
  8. Incredible! - Graestan Jedi Order (This party's over) 02:56, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Fantastic stuff! Thefourdotelipsis 09:13, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
  10. Inqvote I also recommend we rename this article "The complete and entire details of the TIE Defender and every aspect of it" ;-) Great stuff Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 21:14, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the throne of Emperor Imperialles:
    • References: The article contains several instances of references being placed before punctuation.
    • Role: Some thin paragraphs here. Consider fleshing them out or merging them.
    • Training: The last four paragraphs of this section are pretty thin. It might have worked if they weren't all very similar. Consider merging them, at least.
    --Imperialles 21:57, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
    • Training, Role, and references addressed--MIS Tau 1 02:28, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
  • From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • How is the introduction of the TIE Avenger "recent" in an IU setting?
    • clarify "sympathizer non-essential craft" please
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:11, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
      • Well, the Avenger didn't come in until after Yavin which was fairly recent. Anyway, I've removed the offending word and rewritten the non-essential craft bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:10, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
  • From the lair of Hobbes15
    • .Over three redlinks. Destroy them! ;)
    • 4.5- "Formerly under the command of General Arnothian, he had intended to use the TIE Defenders to establish himself as a warlord before Director of Imperial Intelligence Ysanne Isard disposed of him...". This needs to be reworded- it seems like Wedge had intended to become a warlord, not Arnothian.
    • A little more detail on how and why the real Isard was killed (4.5).
    • That's all on this one. Very good work. Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 04:49, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
      • Fixed. I'll kill the other redlinks later. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:35, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 21:21, 9 September 2007 (UTC)

  • Personally, I think the atmospheric speed is crap, but it's canon. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:11, 9 September 2007 (UTC)