Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/T'achak T'andar

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T'achak T'andar

  • Nominated by: Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:00, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A fast moving ball of fur. Sounds cute, right? Tell that to the Critters.

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:34, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote --Eyrezer 10:04, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Give him his damn Juri Juice, Judder! Menkooroo 23:20, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
  4. JangFett (Talk) 21:36, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Plagueis327 05:13, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Other than the Incom redirect (which I fixed) it's great. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 14:59, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:30, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Page doesn't take shit from Chadra-Fans.
  • As with the other Farstar crew members, can we get a quick mention at the end that the crew eventually tracked down and defeated Sarne?
    • Added.
  • "Believed to still be able to pose a danger to the security of the region, the CR90 corvette FarStar was tasked with..." reads as if the Farstar is the danger. Can you reword?
    • Try that.
  • Since we know that he participated in the Battle of Kal'Shebbol in some sort of capacity, can we get a few details of how the battle played out, ie, what the New Republic did to achieve victory? Given his role with the Katarn Commandos, a mention of how they neutralized the planetary shields would fit, I think, without making any assumptions.
    • Well, I'm wary about adding anything since he was not present as part of the commando team on the planet (all eight members of the team are named in the narrative). All we literally know is that he was part of the task force.
      • Ah, OK. In that case, can we just get a sentence or two indicating how the task force wins? A little something more than the current vague mention of a "New Republic victory" would seem relevant if this guy is part of the force. Menkooroo 20:43, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
        • How's that?
  • Is he a scout? Category:Scouts is used, but there's no mention of it in the article. Menkooroo 02:51, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
    • I think I added that since he was assigned to patrol duty. I've removed it for now, though. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

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