Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Subjugation of Parrlay

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Subjugation of Parrlay

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:24, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This is just the beginning
• Date Archived: 15:48, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1412 words (197 introduction, 895 body, 320 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1413 words (198 introduction, 895 body, 320 behind the scenes)
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(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. I have enjoyed this read a lot. Awesome work! — Samonic 09:35, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
2. NanoLuuke^{Cloning facility} 21:55, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:47, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
4. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:17, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
5. This vote can mean only one thing—support. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:37, 4 February 2023 (UTC)
6. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:17, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
7. Impressive work! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:46, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Looks like the wrong pronoun here: "In preparation for their full scale invasion of the planet, Trade Federation Viceroy Nute Gunray..."
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:27, 11 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry for the delay. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:47, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
• Review note: I've corrected your semicolon usage. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:16, 8 December 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• The event's alternate name is currently intro-exclusive.
  • Done
• It looks to me that the numbers of droidekas, Tuskcat Troopers, and royal troopers (including recruits) are in disagreement between the infobox and the article's body. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:27, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done, had to reorganize quite a bit, think I had a few double ups in there. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:11, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
    • The recruit count still looks off. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:53, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
      • Fixed Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:22, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

I've done what I believe is a fairly comprehensive search through all the TPM related sources that I can find, but here's a list of everything that I suspect mentions this or uses one of the two TPM lines of dialogue quoted in the article:

• Jedi Escape
• Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace reference book
• Star Wars Episode I: The Data File
• Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace (PhotoComic)
• Star Wars: Episode I Insider's Guide
• Star Wars: The Official Starships & Vehicles Collection 62
• Episode I Adventures Game Book 13: Danger on Naboo

Always happy to see what other info might be out there Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:24, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

• Would it be possible to have the Bibble quote in audio too? NanoLuuke^{Cloning facility} 21:55, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

• The dialogue in the Insider's Guide, which is also in the illustrated screenplay, only refers to the Trade Federation as using jamming technology so I'm not sure if that can be claimed as a reference to this battle, here's the dialogue that begins as soon as Palpatine's hologram dissipates:

Panaka (to his sergeant): Check the transmission generators…

Bibble: A malfunction?

Panaka: It could be the Federation jamming us, your highness

Bibble: A communications disruption could only mean one thing. Invasion! Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:22, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

• Upon checking Episode I Adventures Game Book 13: Danger on Naboo, it does not include Bibble's line. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:01, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Thanks Amazingly Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:45, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:46, 1 March 2023 (UTC)