- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Legacy 23
- Nominated by: Menkooroo 14:35, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: What the hell?
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- I'd like to see more of these, dude.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:06, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 20:00, September 18, 2010 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 10:15, November 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Interesting article. 1358 (Talk) 15:22, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 00:53, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:51, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Attack of the Clone
Is there a reason why the full name of the comic isn't listed in the infobox? I realize that the name may be a bit long, but I think it would be better to have it there for consistency's sake.- Yeah, definitely. Changed.
Unsourced item in the infobox, though I'm assuming that it would be to the comic itself.- Can't believe I forgot to source that. Fixed.
This last one isn't really an objection, but could you just quickly go through the Appearances list and double-check for any ones that might need the {{1st}} tag? I corrected a few myself just based on what the article says, but I'd appreciate it if you could take a look at that yourself.- Rounded out the list.
- Nice work otherwise. CC7567 (talk) 08:30, November 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you, and for the review too! Menkooroo 09:19, November 26, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
"…would eventually end up at the beginning of Star Wars: Legacy: Vector. Star Wars: Vector was a crossover event that…" That reads very choppy. Could you find a way to combine or whatever to make it read smoother? 1358 (Talk) 19:23, December 19, 2010 (UTC)- Yeah, you're right. I've rejigged it; how's it look?
Development: Could you add a source for Galactic Phrase Book and Travel Guide's release date? The current reference doesn't seem to give this information.- Sourced the book itself. Nice catch.
"Roan Fel": "Early in the series, Skywalker was a guest of his on Bastion, but Fel allowed him to depart the planet." Was Skywalker his prisoner? If he wasn't, why would Fel not let him depart the planet? Can you please clarify?- Clarified!
"Marasiah Fel": "Marasiah Fel played a large role in Legacy's first story arc, Broken,[21][26] before disappearing from its pages for over a year" You mean she disappeared from the series' pages? This sounds like she appeared from the story arc.- Good call. Changed.
- Kinda nitpicky, possibly, but whatever. :P 1358 (Talk) 19:23, December 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Not nitpicky! Helpful. Thank you for the review. :D Menkooroo 04:19, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
Any reason Chak gets a section and Kee doesn't? Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:31, December 24, 2010 (UTC)- Yeah! Definitely a conscious decision. Whenever I make a characters section in an OOU article, I always try to make it the least redundant it can possibly be --- that is, if multiple characters play essentially the same role, I like to use a single entry to represent the lot of them. For example, in Agents of Chaos, several of Droma's family members have their own refugee plotline going in Jedi Eclipse, so I chose Melisma to represent all of them. I also used Belindi Kalenda to represent both her and Major Showolter, and ditto for a few other characters. Anyway, back to the topic at hand: If I gave Kee an entry, I'd worry about it being identical to Chak's. As it is, I've worded Chak's entry so as to be about both him and Kee (they, the two, their, etc). Does that make sense? Menkooroo 16:38, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Makes sense. But could you not do it as Chak and Kee to give them equal billing? {{Main}} works with two parameters so there wouldn't be a problem there and there's at least one picture of them together. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Done. Grabbed an image of the two of them together from the issue itself. It's a little tall, but I think it works. Menkooroo 05:44, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Makes sense. But could you not do it as Chak and Kee to give them equal billing? {{Main}} works with two parameters so there wouldn't be a problem there and there's at least one picture of them together. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:09, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah! Definitely a conscious decision. Whenever I make a characters section in an OOU article, I always try to make it the least redundant it can possibly be --- that is, if multiple characters play essentially the same role, I like to use a single entry to represent the lot of them. For example, in Agents of Chaos, several of Droma's family members have their own refugee plotline going in Jedi Eclipse, so I chose Melisma to represent all of them. I also used Belindi Kalenda to represent both her and Major Showolter, and ditto for a few other characters. Anyway, back to the topic at hand: If I gave Kee an entry, I'd worry about it being identical to Chak's. As it is, I've worded Chak's entry so as to be about both him and Kee (they, the two, their, etc). Does that make sense? Menkooroo 16:38, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 13:51, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Adheres to that Out of universe layout guide on starwars.wikia.com (backup link not verified!) that I'm going to officially propose real soon. Menkooroo 14:35, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
