- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Star Saber XC-01 starfighter
- Nominated by: Graestan(Talk) 05:30, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Okay, that's all. I promise. Graestan(Talk) 05:30, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
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Support
More TOTJ goodness.—Tommy
(Nine two eight one) 16:12, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:49, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:15, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 23:56, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:20, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
Oppose
- Toprawa:
Can we link to a mission here? "From their initial combat mission against the Krath stronghold of Cinnagar"The fourth paragraph of the History section contains too much peripheral detail that distracts from the subject of the Star Saber. Please trim the fat. See me if needed.I've read this sentence at least three times now. Please do something to amend this. I might recommend removing one of the previous two: "In the war and the era that followed, the pilots who chose to fly the fighters included Jedi who could compensate for their shortcomings with the Force."- Nice work on the editorial decision-making concerning the spec discrepancies. :)
- Not an objection, but I changed "laser cannons" to "blaster cannons" in both the intro and body per the infobox. Change back if that's incorrect at all. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:38, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
The description section and the infobox disagree on the class of hyperdrive. From the BTS stuff, I guess the infobox is correct. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:48, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:20, 13 February 2009 (UTC)