Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Solla Deremot

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Solla Deremot

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:55, July 2, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: DarkStryder returns.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Nifty! Thefourdotelipsis 01:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)
2. Xicer9^(Combadge) 13:23, July 5, 2010 (UTC)
3. Aren't you tired of this story yet? Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:56, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
4. The rest of us are. :P Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:40, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
5. Agreed. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 15:21, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:30, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Xicer

• Rising tensions: "A small detachment of soldiers from the team's security detachment..." "Detachment" is repetitive.
  • Reworded.
• Rescue: "Kal'Shebbol had been liberated by New Republic forces, forcing Moff Sarne to flee into the depths of the Kathol sector with the remains of his forces." Similarly, overuse of "forces/forcing".
  • Reworded.
• Could you work her initial distrust of the New Republic forces into the P&T? It could go well with the second part of that section.
  • Added.
• Interesting stuff! Xicer9^(Combadge) 21:51, July 2, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review! - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:54, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:30, July 19, 2010 (UTC)