Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Skirmish on The Wheel

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Skirmish on The Wheel

(4 Inqs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:17, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Plagueis327 (talk) 03:02, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Nice work.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:41, January 4, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:03, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 04:22, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Dat infobox. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:54, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:33, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  8. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:43, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • You might want to mention the corresponding years of the skirmishes on the Wheel in the Youmay tag; it would help for specificity.
  • Would the Remnant Crix-class diplomatic courier shuttle and Bovark's Nune-class Imperial shuttle deserve articles? They should be notable enough for articles if they have named crew and/or owners (or affiliations), which looks to be the case.
    • Please make sure to take care of those redlinks, as they affect the infobox and intro. CC7567 (talk) 04:17, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
      • There are no redlinks --- I created both articles about half an hour ago. Menkooroo (talk) 04:19, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
        • Apologies, was viewing an older version of the page when I looked through it. CC7567 (talk) 04:22, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  • Is "wisened" a formal/actual word? The closest word I can find is "wizen," which doesn't have the same meaning. CC7567 (talk) 21:31, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. I believe I've taken care of all three. Menkooroo (talk) 03:56, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • This sentence is really rather ponderous and difficult to digest. I had to read it three or four times before I finally understood what it was trying to say. Can we break this up at all? "Exiled Emperor Roan Fel had sent Captain Mingo Bovark to The Wheel to negotiate with Remnant Admiral Gar Stazi due to Fel's belief that he had a stalemate against Darth Krayt's forces in the ongoing Second Imperial Civil War, and the Sith–Imperial agents Jor Torlin and Morrigan Corde were concurrently on the station hunting for the former Jedi Cade Skywalker, whom Krayt sought." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:37, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • I've separated the stuff about Torlin and Corde into its own sentence and completely written the former part. How's it look now? Menkooroo (talk) 07:59, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
      • Now that I've looked at this again fresh, I realize I was misinterpreting the ndash in "Sith-Imperial" as an em-dash, which was the source of my confusion. If you want to change back to your original version, that's perfectly fine, as it's not nearly as confusing as I thought it was. I'm fine with either version. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:33, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:33, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

  • Yep, "The Wheel" should have both words capitalized, even in mid-sentence, per the Legacy Era Campaign Guide. Menkooroo (talk) 15:22, January 3, 2013 (UTC)