Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sindra

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Sindra

  • Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 21:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Current GA that also meets current FA standards.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:49, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:59, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 22:13, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
  4. NAYAYEN:TALK 21:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:15, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cool. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:31, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Just a couple of things
  • Is there an article for the duel? It takes up roughly half of her bio so it seems like an important event.
    • Addressed.
  • You need to provide a source for it being a cut AJ story, since that information can't really be sourced to the story itself. This means that you'll have to source the whole article of course. Also, for the sentence about it being found at the Star Wars Fanboy Association, you should provide a ref that includes a link to the story. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 17:11, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
    • Addressed. Although, you might have to fix the links in the reftags, since I'm notoriously bad at creating those. Otherwise, thank you very much for the help and for the review. Please let me know if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 21:54, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm confused here over your reference to Sindra as a Dark Jedi: "However, the Dark Jedi's cackling only served as the catalyst for Dray's surrender..." Throughout the article she is described as being a Sith apprentice in Sith training under a Sith Master, and the article employs the Sith character infobox, rather than the Dark Jedi character infobox. Is this description of a "Dark Jedi" really synonymous? Because it seems to suggest otherwise.
    • Addressed.
  • What is Lostworlds? Some sort of descriptor should accompany this mention. I would also recommending pipelinking an external link to their website, if possible: "According to Lostworlds, Light and Shadow was originally slated to feature" Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:40, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
    • Yeah, about that...see, Xicer gave me that website after he objected to the "cancelled adventure journal" statement. When I later asked him what "Lostworlds" was, he replied that it was simply a fansite (which, by the way, isn't even called Lostworlds). With all that now on my plate, I don't quite know how to proceed. Any suggestions?—Tommy 9281 20:10, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
      • Just call it exactly that: "the Star Wars fansite Lostworlds." Please also pipelink the external link. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:17, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
        • Addressed. Thanks for the review, Toprawa. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 14:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
  • Minor point, but does a biography that short really need three subsections? At 1920x1200 they look pretty tiny. I'd have thought "Sith apprentice" and "Confronting a Jedi" would suffice, and there'd still be room for two quotes. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:58, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
    • Addressed. Thanks for the review, GT. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 20:10, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:31, July 28, 2010 (UTC)