- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Shmi Skywalker Lars
(0 Inq/0 Users/0 Total)
Support
Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 19:30, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
- Referencing is practically non-existent
TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 19:32, 30 July 2007 (UTC) - Per Ackbar. Chack Jadson Talk 19:34, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Less than 1000 words, not sourced. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:37, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Following rules 1, 9, 11, & 12 would be a good start. -- Ozzel 20:10, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
- Rule 1: Unprofessional language throughout. Poor sectioning.
- Rule 7: Intro too short for front page. And the intro is more about Anakin than Shmi.
- Rule 9: Hardly complete from all sources.
- Rule 11: Incomplete sourcing. More precisely, no inline sourcing at all.
- Rule 12: Unsourced images.
- Rule 13: Too many quotes per section.
- Rule 14: Personality and traits far too brief.
- The article has potential, but it's not even GA quality at the moment. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 18:44, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
- Per both INQ's, Culator and Ataru. Greyman(Paratus) 19:00, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
- Per everyone. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 19:45, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
Comments
- I refuse to read a nom that fails to meet such basic requirements as have already been noted. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 16:05, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
Remove Nom (Inq only)
Since not even the nominator is supporting it now. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:31, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
Remove. Greyman(Paratus) 11:33, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
Gonk (Gonk!) 15:52, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:09, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
Thefourdotelipsis 00:32, 8 August 2007 (UTC)