Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Shintel

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Shintel

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:56, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: DarkStryder planet.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Plagueis327 (talk) 21:43, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 16:10, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:35, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
4. ~Savage 19:19, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
5. Menkooroo (talk) 02:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
6. Cade Calrayn 22:27, October 30, 2012 (UTC)
7. --Eyrezer (talk) 22:25, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Savaged…

• Great stuff, Cav; just a few things. Don't hyperspace travel times vary depending on hyperdrive class? Might be worth adding just a short note to say the times quoted are for a standard, type 1 hyperdrive.
  • Added.
• Since a shadowport can be a planet, a city, or a space station, I think it might be worth noting that Taquila Beach is a station, not a ship or planet of some sort.
  • Added.
• There's a bit of infobox-only info: that it's temperate, and its grid coordinates.
  • Added.
• No "Inhabitants" section?
  • Well, the only inhabitants are 2,000 Imperial Army personnel, and their presence is covered in other sections and there's no distinct culture so I didn't think it was necessary. Added, though.
• You mention that Sarne had three additional objectives on Shintel, but I can't see the second (or am overlooking it). Can you add a "secondly" somewhere, to go with the "firstly" and "last"? ~Savage 15:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • You overlooked it, but it wasn't clearly signposted. Clarified. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:00, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:26, November 2, 2012 (UTC)