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Shawda Ubb
- Nominated by: ~Savage
20:50, April 25, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: It's been a while since I've FA'ed a movie alien.
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
--Eyrezer 12:32, June 3, 2011 (UTC)- Looks good. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
- –Tm_T (Talk) 21:11, June 10, 2011 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:16, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 07:44, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 11:56, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Ecks Dee
Seeing as these two sentences are somewhat related, could they be merged? "On Manpha, Shawda Ubb ate uncooked swamp plants and raw fish. They avoided cooked and processed food."For clarity, could you say "Galactic Empire" or "the reign of the Galactic Empire" here instead of New Order? Some people might not know what the "New Order" is. "By the time of the New Order, however…"Can an article be created for "the only spaceport," or does the OS only say there was one spaceport, nothing else?- 1358 (Talk) 05:12, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- The first and second objections should be taken care of. As for the third, I didn't make an article since it's my understanding that spaceport cities are the spaceport. Like "Mos Eisley spaceport. You will never find..." But the OS doesn't say this, it says, "The capital city of Manphan hosts the planet's only spaceport." Due to the ambiguity, I didn't make an article. Do you think I should? ~Savage
15:08, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- The first and second objections should be taken care of. As for the third, I didn't make an article since it's my understanding that spaceport cities are the spaceport. Like "Mos Eisley spaceport. You will never find..." But the OS doesn't say this, it says, "The capital city of Manphan hosts the planet's only spaceport." Due to the ambiguity, I didn't make an article. Do you think I should? ~Savage
Green Tentacle
I assume there's no quotes available? Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:39, June 20, 2011 (UTC)- No, not really, unfortunately. There's the line from ROTJ, where Joh Yowza tells Rappertunie something in Huttese, but that'd be fairly incomprehensible to readers I think. ~Savage
19:13, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- You mean you're not fluent?! :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:16, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- My Huttese has gotten rusty. Don't rub it in. ;P ~Savage
22:28, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- My Huttese has gotten rusty. Don't rub it in. ;P ~Savage
- You mean you're not fluent?! :P Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:16, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
- No, not really, unfortunately. There's the line from ROTJ, where Joh Yowza tells Rappertunie something in Huttese, but that'd be fairly incomprehensible to readers I think. ~Savage
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 11:56, June 22, 2011 (UTC)