Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Seviss Vaa

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Contents

  • 1 Seviss Vaa
    • 1.1 (4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Monstahs!
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Seviss Vaa

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 03:06, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It was a graveyard smash.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Very well done.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 20:46, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:19, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:40, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 05:18, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Read through it, made a small adjustment to the intro wording to eliminate some redundancy, fixed the spelling, and defaultsorted the article. Looks pretty solid to me. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:28, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Monstahs!
  • In the intro it sounds like Vaa intended the creature to go berserk at the sight of a lightsaber, whereas in the bio it sounds like that was an unintended side-effect.
    • Given it a bit of a tweak, let us know if it's OK.
  • Nice work, as usual. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:36, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
    • Danke. Thefourdotelipsis 05:13, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:38, September 16, 2010 (UTC)