Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Serp

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Serp

  • Nominated by: ~SavageBOB sig 18:16, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not at all the same as this species. Completely different. ~SavageBOB sig 18:16, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:23, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
  2. --Eyrezer (talk) 00:57, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 21:05, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Winterz (talk) 00:35, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  5. My apologise I somehow missed the mount's link during my first read through. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:28, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 22:18, March 17, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:46, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  • Could we get an article for the reptiles they ride in the doom joust? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:25, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • The article already exists in fact Unidentified Serp mount. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:27, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Can the paragraphs for "Biology and appearance" be merged into one, or perhaps two?
  • In contrast, females were distinguished from the males by their slimmer physique and prominent breasts.[5] They had a prominent snout - repetition of "prominent", please vary one.
  • He used the forbidden knowledge to his personal jousting equipment, - I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here.
  • The Rebels came under fire when they arrived in-system. - from who? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 22:47, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
    • Ah, all fixed. I appreciate the review! ~SavageBOB sig 14:12, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:54, March 24, 2013 (UTC)