Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Separatist supply ship

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Separatist supply ship

• Nominated by: CC7567 ^(talk) 21:01, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For those of you who were around in 2009—remember when I had ten articles on the FAN at a time? I had to break that record sometime.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Excellent job. Plagueis327 (talk) 21:18, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:31, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, January 23, 2013 (UTC)
4. Cade Calrayn 22:50, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:53, February 1, 2013 (UTC)
6. Menkooroo (talk) 00:47, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd

• I think in the intro just a touch of context should be given for Count Dooku.
  • Added "Head of State."
• In the Role section, you describe it as a "transport" three times in two sentences. Try to vary somewhat.
  • Varied slightly.
• Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:47, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:48, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cadeth

• "Initially a corporate vessel, the Separatist supply ship was converted as a model of transport craft by the Confederacy of Independent Systems." The "converted as a model" part seems a little off - shouldn't it be "converted into a model", or am I wrong?
  • From what I understand it can work either way; it's being used as a synonym of "repurposed," which would be worded that way.
• You reference the blockade of Serenno several times, but it's left me confused. Is the blockade a protective measure, or is it an offensive one? If it's an attack, it should have an article, but either way I think you should specify whether the blockade was protective or an attack.
  • In the History section, Serenno is mentioned as a "Separatist stronghold," and I believe the fact that the Confederate Navy was the one blockading Serenno should be enough to assume that it's a protective blockade. I'd be happy to add it if you feel strongly about it, but I don't see it as really necessary.
    • Ah, I didn't see that. Cade Calrayn 22:50, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
• Good work. Cade Calrayn 17:01, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:47, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Blue

• Could the article mention the blue paint scheme, which includes the Separatist crest? Seems like notable info for the Characteristics section.
  • Added.
• The History section sources the name "Separatist support ship" to the Encyclopedia entry --- is that correct? I can't seem to find it there. Should it be sourced to the Plan of Dissent episode guide? Menkooroo (talk) 03:54, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:26, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• Blame Jang—he's the one who reminded me about that. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:01, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
  • 2009. Good memories. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 15:00, October 12, 2012 (UTC)
• 1,273 words. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:06, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:47, February 4, 2013 (UTC)