Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sebiris

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Sebiris

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I had to figure out the damn TORcite template for this ...

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Plagueis327 (talk) 17:40, October 20, 2012 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:47, December 24, 2012 (UTC)
3. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
4. TORcite's not that bad... Cite_web's worse. Cade Calrayn 18:41, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
5. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:15, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
6. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 13:41, February 18, 2013 (UTC)
7. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:40, February 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth

• "the gravity was 1.2 of standard" - is there a word missing there?
  • Nope. Standard gravity is 1. Therefore "1.2 of standard" indicates that the gravity is heavier/denser than the standard gravity found on most worlds. "The gravity was 1.2 of standard gravity" doesn't read well, what with the repetition of "gravity".
• I'm confused by the end of the History section. Was it the Kathol who visited Sebiris, or is it not known? Cade Calrayn 17:34, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Its not known. The inference is that they were, but no direct link was made during the Campaign. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:38, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• A question over which I don't want to object: Is this planet not mentioned in The Kathol Outback? Our article on Sebiris Run says "The Sebiris Run connected Sebiris with the worlds of the Pimbrellan League" and only sources The Kathol Outback. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added source. Nice catch. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:48, February 11, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 03:41, February 19, 2013 (UTC)