Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rugor Nass (second nomination)

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Rugor Nass

(1 Inq/1 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
2. Don't see why not. Unit 8311 12:10, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. A few things:
   • Introduction: "generally accepted as the foremost Gungan of his time." Weasel words.
     • Removed.
   • Punctuation: Em dashes are erroneously surrounded by spaces.
     • Fixed by someone else.
   • Excessive links: This article has a lot. Remove them.
     • Fixed by someone else.
   • Unsourced images: File:Bossnass.jpg, File:Naboo celebration.jpg.
     • Fixed.
   • Behind the scenes: This section could be significantly expanded.
     • Expanded. Thefourdotelipsis 11:44, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Thank you. --Imperialles 14:12, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 11:28, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Since he's too lazy to object himself: "<Jaymach> he hasn't included all info from the EpI Adventures books" Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 10:33, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
   • From the desk of Atarumaster88
     • A bit more detail from Galactic Battlegrounds please. He has at least two missions in the campaign.
       • Bit more added. Thefourdotelipsis 13:10, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Where is "superior" in reference to the Naboo used in The Phantom Menace? Are the quotation marks indicating a direct quote?
       • Removed. As I said...long time ago. Thefourdotelipsis 10:43, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Link bongo submarine (I doubt it is the same as a heyblibber)
       • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 10:43, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
     • 5 REDLINKS OMGZ!!1!!! ;-) Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 23:20, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
       • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 09:36, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
         • I think not sirrah! Fie on thee for thy despicable redlinks. ;-) Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 14:30, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:27, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
       • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 09:36, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• This one's an oldie, so feel free to tear it a new one. Thefourdotelipsis 12:03, 25 August 2007 (UTC)