- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Rook Kast
- Nominated by: Cevan
(talk) 23:18, February 21, 2017 (UTC) - Nomination comments: The other canon Kast.
(0 Inqs/3 Users/3 Total)
(Votes required: 3 Inqvotes required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)
Support
- You could probably add another picture, but I'll leave it up to you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:28, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
- Great work!
AnilSerifoglu (talk) 01:43, June 7, 2017 (UTC) - Let's hope Kast shows up in rebels --Lewisr (talk) 01:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)
Object
Some things
Any chance you could expand the intro with contextual info and an oveerall summary on her bio?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 13:48, February 27, 2017 (UTC)- I can try shortening and/or reworking it if you'd like, but how's that? Cevan (talk) 18:00, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- Definitely needs shortening. I can take a pass at it, if you'd like. I strangely enjoy writing intros. >.> - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:21, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah, I figured as such. If you'd like to have a go at it, be my guest! Cevan
(talk) 18:54, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- I cut it down to remove over-contexualization, so now it mostly just focuses on Kast while giving some basic context. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:29, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks Brandon, that looks great! Is that more to your liking, Jedi Kasra? Cevan (talk) 19:37, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 00:42, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks Brandon, that looks great! Is that more to your liking, Jedi Kasra? Cevan
- I cut it down to remove over-contexualization, so now it mostly just focuses on Kast while giving some basic context. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:29, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah, I figured as such. If you'd like to have a go at it, be my guest! Cevan
- Definitely needs shortening. I can take a pass at it, if you'd like. I strangely enjoy writing intros. >.> - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:21, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
- I can try shortening and/or reworking it if you'd like, but how's that? Cevan
Ayrehead
Could you subsection the body of the article please?Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)Since Rook appears in every issue of Son of Dathomir, I'm fairly certain the correct formatting is to simply list the series articles in appearances instead of all four issues.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)- Nope, we changed the relevant section of the Layout Guide at the latest Mofference. Imperators II(Talk) 12:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
- Ah, totally forgot about that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:41, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
- Nope, we changed the relevant section of the Layout Guide at the latest Mofference. Imperators II(Talk) 12:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
AnilSerifoglu
Can you please add that Son of Dathomir comics were based on unproduced The Clone Wars episodes? It is very likely that the character Rook Kast originate in those scripts. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
- Subsectioning is good, but three consecutive single-paragraph sections is too much and definitely goes against the MOS's "Avoid overuse of sub-headings." part. See if you could do some tweaking there.
- The page is currently in Category:Pages with missing permanent archival links. You'll have to pass a
|archivedate=to the DB templates. 1358 (Talk) 22:11, February 24, 2018 (UTC)
Comments
It is only my personal preference, but I agree with Ayrehead02 that the article could use one or two more images. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
- With objections older than a week and the nominator inactive for more than a month, this nomination is eligible for removal. 1358 (Talk) 15:32, March 4, 2018 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:28, March 4, 2018 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 19:41, March 4, 2018 (UTC)
